All Comments on 'Life of Mick Ch. 02'

It did nothing for me too complicated.

Mind you it must keep the office cleaners in work.

Started strong and ended strong

Definitely more please, the writing got me an erection.

Please have Mick DP his daughter-in-law Ava with the help of his son in one of the next two chapters.

I wasn't too crazy about the daddy daughter incest, but at least it was steps. As long as they refrain from calling him Daddy during sex it's still pretty hot.

Mick needs to make Samantha a regular bed partner but he also needs to bang the crap outta each of his daughter-in-laws, especially Ana. He and Hunter need to DP her a few times.

All in all, good work. I gave part 1 a 4 but this got 5☆s.

Sorry for the delay. I have been very sick with COVID19. My brain seems totally fried and on top of that, I have body spasms so severe that I can't even see, let alone type. I think I'm getting better now after being released from the hospital. At this point, I have no idea where this story is going. It hurts to even think about it. The initial thought is that I've got too many irons in the fire and have to figure it out somehow.

Hi. The story's great, however more concerned with your health. I'll think of you until your better. I myself is supercritical I'm 82 and have more problems than you can shake a stick at.

Best regards & get well soon. Need to sort out Mick and his 2 sons. Still, no reason why his wife should not get her rocks off, she must have been a nympho. George

Well I understand about the health issues. It seems that the authors of "The Morrisons" and the author of "A new life for Dr Mitchel" since I havent seen a story from either author in awhile. Health has to come first. The dad should get pay back by screwing both the sons wives and be the one to make himself a grandpa