All Comments on 'Life of Paul Ch. 02: Amber'

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AngusM about 3 years ago

Your preamble has me all confused so what is the purpose of it?

Anonymous12 months ago

Rereading this story, and obviously this was written way before the rest of the life of Paul chapters, but he has obviously been with two girls at once before many times, 3 if you include the final Pauls departure chapter. Just something theas was overlooked with these later cheaper or just decided to change the story a bit.

Still a very good read....5 Stars

Kernflakes 15 days ago

So rereading this story again.....added 5 stars, because some how I forgot to. Also, well he obviously has been in a threesome before, but you obviously hadn't written those stories yet when you wrote this. Still just as good as I remember, even though Amber is not my favorite

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