All Comments on 'Life Pt. 01'

Good beginning!

5

Great story and characters....just my speed......enjoyed reading it alot.

Cheers

It's a good day when I see another story from you. The only issue I ever have is having to wait for the next part to post!

Very nice start, with Dee Dee shaping up to be a very good character. At 41, she’s mature enough to know her body and what she wants. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

You did it again. Great story line and your presentation is getting better with each story. Keep em coming.

Awesome start to a series, looking forward to more, keep them coming

Can't wait for part 2.

Well I have enjoyed your story telling.

Thank you.

Cheers.

Cracker, two great, believable characters and more to come from both them and the storyline, I’m looking forward to the next episode, (where I suspect a ex-colleague makes a reappearance), thanks for writing and posting R410a!

Great, character-driven story! 5/5!!!

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You're truly a gifted storyteller!

Great story. I cannot wait to read more. Thanks for taking your time writing it. I give it 10 stars!!!

Enjoyed this. Looking forward to part 2.

Excellent story!!! I LOVE your writing!

I will happily read next chapters and your other stories ;-)

VERY REAL VERY ROMANTIC

I sure hope Tom and Dee Dee get together! They seem to be evenly matched, and genuinely good for each other! I hope the sexy, muscular Tom displays a nicely haired chest and abs when he is finally stripped of his shirt when Dee Dee gets him in the bedroom. He is one very attractive and genuinely nice young man! Please write more! I absolutely LOVE your stories!

Really nice romantic story looking forward to part 2 5 stars

Another R410a master piece! Love your work, Sir!

Cheers

SAGE

With all the goings on about Dees panties, how could I not give it five stars, LOL. Looking forward to the next chapters because it's such a good story. Thanks

Enjoyed chapter one very much, great character development, can't wait for chapter two!

I really like the way you build the stories you write. I am looking forward to the next installment.

Damn I wish I could write romance as good as you, please keep this one going for a good long while. 5⭐️

What a fun read. You have me totally hooked. Love the story and your characters are deep and interesting.