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Click hereAlice opened the door before the soft knock could come, not wanting to alert Joey to the fact that she was having another boy in her apartment. She ushered the neighbor in. "I'm fine," she said impatiently, wanting him to be gone. She didn't have room for another male in her life.
"No, you're not. I saw him. He's too rough with you. Why do you stay with him?"
"What business is it of yours?" Alice asked angrily. "I don't even know your damn name, but I'm supposed to tell you intimate details about my life?? I don't think so, buddy!"
"I'm Josh. And I can help you, if you'll let me." He did have kind eyes and Alice wanted to trust him but honestly, she didn't believe him, nor did she believe that he could or would do anything to help her.
"What do you think you saw?" Alice asked, wanting to get an idea of what she was dealing with.
Josh stepped close to her and cupped her cheek. "He's too rough with you. Way too rough. If that's what you're into, I'll turn around and leave and never mention it again. But I really don't think you're as into it as he is. I think you've learned to get whatever pleasure you can out of it." He caressed her cheek, his thumb running soothingly over her raw skin. "You are too beautiful to be treated that way."
Alice flushed, not knowing what to think. How does he know this about her? He was absolutely right, that while she didn't mind a little roughness, she hated Joey and her father's form of brutality. It aroused her, only because she had to find some kind of pleasure in the situation, or else she would go crazy.
Josh leaned closer to her, his lips almost hovering over hers. "You should be kissed and teased and loved and fucked and fingered every moment of every day. If you'll trust me, I'll show you that you deserve better than what you have right now."
Alice was overwhelmed by what he was saying. She hadn't felt love, real love, since her mother died. It was such a foreign but warm concept that her eyes filled with tears. She looked up at Josh, tears swimming in her eyes. "Help me, Josh."
- COMMENTS
tamashi310over 8 years agoIt seems like there's a lot of negative feedback for this story. Absolutely there is nothing erotic about it, however, it does make for an interesting beginning to what could be a pretty epic love story. And I'm definitely down for that!! I hope you continue this ExGirl, I'm very curious to see where you're headed with this. 🤘🏽
gmann57over 8 years agoThis shit happens, I hope theres more and I hope theres a lot more pain , But not for Alice
imurddyover 8 years agoI agree! That was rather depressing, it might be realistic, but not really what most people look for on this site. Not badly written for such a gruesome story, though it seemed like it was headed towards a snuff production.
Averygoodlayover 8 years agoSorry but that was some sick and twisted shit on the first page and that was as far as I could read.
Anonymousover 8 years agoDid she leave the trash behind and live happily ever after with the peeping Tom or did he join in on the abuse. Poor girl has no luck.
Anonymousover 8 years agoAmazing. In all of that, you never actually said anything about the story. All you did was trash others for daring to have a different opinion. That of course is an assumption because, as I noted, you never really voice an opinion on the story.
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The commented on the story, YOU commented on them, and yet THEY'RE they Naysayers. On what fucking planet?
Anonymousover 8 years agoWanna be goth and teen angst? My children aren't even that young. I just believe in positive criricism unstead of spewing a bunch if unproductive drivle. But hey, everyone has a mind of their own albeit a closed and rather small one . . .
Epiphany_Jonesover 8 years ago...when I checked to see if the author had a response to my comment, and instead I find two anonymous responses. I can only assume they were written by a pair of wannabe Goths, bubbling over with teen angst, while wondering which black shirt to wear with their black skinny jeans, and listening to Morrissey. I'd respond to your idiocy, but I kinda think I just did.
Anonymousover 8 years agoHey, Naysayer: Maybe you should be the one to lighten up by going outside in your perfect fucking world and snorting up all the rose colored air that your perfect world lungs will allow, and then maybe you will realize that this world is far from perfect (except where you live, of course). Naysayers are hateful, vindictive creatures whose small, closed minds, are only equaled by their teeny, tiny hands and even smaller cocks. Oh, and haters are terrorists, too. Fuck the naysayers.
JESUIS PARIS!
Anonymousover 8 years ago. i got into it, saftey pinned note aside, and am intruiged to see how this one develops. Haters just need to chill the fuck out and maybe write their own shit.
