All Comments on 'Life Takes a Turn'

A very sweet story. Very nice first effort. I can't wait to see more.

Excellent story. I hope you are thinking about adding additional chapters to this story.

Very good story, especially for your first. I hope to see more from you.

Wish to echo other comments: wonderful first story - highly erotic, well paced. Surely you have more to share whether with Steph and Ang or something entirely new. Please.

WOW! For your first story this was amazing

The story moved along at a good pace

Very descriptive. The sex was slow and sensual. I hope these two lovelies have more encounters. I am looking forward to your next story

The only fault I found were minor spelling errors but as we are all human I don't care. Great story and especially for a first.

This needs a part 2

Please, please get an editor to proof read your stories, The writing is really quite good, but the effect is marred by numerous errors :(

The story was sweet and sexy, without becoming vulgar. Thanks for writing it