All Comments on 'Life Unplanned'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

But not really an incest story, is it?

WyndsofChangeWyndsofChangeover 1 year ago

This was an excellent story, and I enjoyed every bit of it. It was hot, sexy, and very well written. I loved it… Up to the point that you took away the blood relationship. I know, I know… It’s still technically incest. And you’re right. According to the law, I mean the law in the real world, they’d still be guilty of incest. Because on the birth certificate, he’s her father. And that’s all the law cares about. I don’t profess to speak for everyone else here, but I’ll tell you that as for me, I don’t come here for “technical” incest. I come here for real incest. Fathers with their natural born daughters making love together. That’s why I’m here. But that’s just my two cents.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Began as an obvious incest but before the end turned out to be exactly not incest. That seemed like a little cop-out because there wasn't enough backstory to support it, but suspending disbelief it was enjoyable to read. What stood out above all was the lack of grammar and spelling errors. That was so refreshing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great read!

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