All Comments on 'Life's Curveballs Ch. 03'

When he turns 18, he can hit the road if he survives!

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If he ends up getting glass slippers from his fairy god mother to wear to the ball I am out.

This should actually be under Novels and Novellas. There's absolutely no romance within the first 3 chapters whatsoever. And seriously, GET AN EDITOR!! 3*

His bastard woman crazy father Byron turned his son into a fucking housemaid!!

How I hate your story and what you're doing to Elliot!!

Hope you're not one of those cunt writers who takes pleasure in demeaning men and reducing then to weak wimpy but it seems like you're heading there!!

NOT ROMANCE

Jesus Christ, went do you writers create such whimpy, pathetic protagonists? You write characters so worthless that it's seriously off putting!!!