All Comments on 'Light and Dark Ch. 04'

You are such a wonderful writer, and I really enjoy this story to the fullest extent. PLEASE POST SOON.

I am really enjoying this!!!! I should be in the garden and yard weeding...but here I have sat. Looking forward to the next chapters!!!

I have been hooked since the first sentence. Cant wait for the next section. Cant wait for all 2 b reavled lol. Hope itz anuther long one.

great story! I hope you continue. I like that, although your story involves supernatural entities, the relationship drama was relatable. Its been great to see them develop into a team too especially since, despite their issues early on, you could tell how much they cared about each other.

i hope you continue this story, its just starting to get really interesting. Great writing. Love it!

more please? I read all so far in less then 1 day need to know what happens!!!