All Comments on 'Light & Water Ch. 01'

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SlickTonySlickTonyabout 19 years ago
Great Beginning

A richly detailed, nicely written story, good local color. I hope Dan can get Cesare over his inhibitions...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
beautiful descriptions

as a venetophile, i loved your descriptions of the city...felt as if i were back there :o)

as a straight woman, i'm not so much into gay male erotica, but i saw venice in the desciption and couldn't resist.

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