All Comments on 'Lights! Camera! Lube! Action!! Pt. 01'

by Ian56

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Basically a good story somewhat undone by the difficult-to-follow, non-chronological early parts. Maybe a re-edit or some added transitions would improve it a lot. Presumably a Pt. 2 is coming with Doris reprising her old role, and maybe Charlie becoming an actor too?

sqdobberssqdobbersalmost 5 years ago
5 stars all the way

A good story well told with plenty of humor in the mix. Looking forward to the next part!

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