by TheBard1982
A fine story, and well written, but the important sex scenes could be improved if you employed more indirectness. This would enhance the mood and the sensuality greatly.
great story great way written but could do more detail when it came to appearance in the bedroom or the encounter
I sometimes write about guns that I know very little about, so I can forgive you about not knowing about repairing leaks (which unfortunately I do know a lot about). How was she to know what plumbing supplies to buy before he’d uncovered the leak I ask myself. No matter, a well written story!
Fantastic story starter.
Now you have to continue worth them and even taking a trip together for a couple of weeks with all kinds of sex.
Very good story but it has possibilities for more than a single story.