All Comments on 'Like a Fine Wine'

by TheBard1982

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BodswoodBodswoodabout 1 year ago

A fine story, and well written, but the important sex scenes could be improved if you employed more indirectness. This would enhance the mood and the sensuality greatly.

Old_fashioned_426Old_fashioned_426about 1 year ago

great story great way written but could do more detail when it came to appearance in the bedroom or the encounter

BriteaseBriteaseabout 1 year ago

I sometimes write about guns that I know very little about, so I can forgive you about not knowing about repairing leaks (which unfortunately I do know a lot about). How was she to know what plumbing supplies to buy before he’d uncovered the leak I ask myself. No matter, a well written story!

kingswedekingswedeabout 1 year ago
Great start

Fantastic story starter.

Now you have to continue worth them and even taking a trip together for a couple of weeks with all kinds of sex.

Coochielover71Coochielover71about 2 months ago

Very good story but it has possibilities for more than a single story.

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