All Comments on 'Like a Sister'

This was an excellent beginning! I really hope for the next chapter with the threesome.

To me, JJ, this is your best story. Five stars. It has the usual hot sex but also perfectly captures Anand's angst! Has he finally gotten what he's craved or hasn't he? Does she love him or is she just playing him? Was he desired or did she just win a challenge? Will there really be a 3some? Can he ever be sure of anything? Is this it? Is it an illusion?

You simply have to continue this! What an excellent twist to the story with Niary being in competition with Neysa, and them having a bisexual relationship. These are interesting, complicated people. Neysa especially is a piece of work. Five stars, even if you don't care about the stars. You have some good characters, and it would be great to develop them a bit. -- JB

I wrote this when I was really sick with a high fever. I was expecting spit wads and a couple of comments about how I suck so bad. I appreciate the positive comment.