All Comments on 'Like Brother and Sister Ch. 09'

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Southpaw1430Southpaw1430over 3 years ago
My Comments

Another great chapter. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good but....

You're very slowwwww

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 3 years ago

Slight error - You mention in this chapter that he didn't know if he would like to titty-fuck his sister yet he did it in the previous chapter. You're doing a great job combining the sex with the growing relationship/love between them. Will Nicole start getting more possessive of Ryan, blocking out Julie? How far will their relationship blossom? Looking forward to the answers... 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I love this story

It’s very hot. I can’t wait for the next chapter with the naked day

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Very good story. Even after 9 chapters it still has plenty of potential, both plot-wise and with all the sex acts that can go on between Ryan Nicole and Julie as well as others.

bshell47bshell47over 3 years ago
Love and tender story

Hope you continue

WargamerWargamerover 1 year ago

She is trying hard to avoid saying what she really feels, she loves him as a man and not just her brother. The hardest step l assure you.

5/5

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOGover 1 year ago

Yep, now we are cooking with gas...

Sister and Brother loving each other...and confessing how much they care for each other/feelings are exposed...is quite endearing!

Where else is this gonna go...??!! Ssssoooooo many roads to travel!

Five**5**Stars!!

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