by silkstockingslover
This was always one of my favorites i am so glad you finely carry it on please font wait another 5 year before writing part 3.
Had never missed that this had been deleted since I had given up that this novella would ever be continued. Enjoyed re-reading. I hope this means that the next chapter will be available shortly. Looking forward to Kelly and Mariah shopping and Kelly’s eventual submission.
This can't be the end yet! We need to see Kelly's submission, or rejection (maybe she takes Taylor instead)! Sorry but it's the curse of being such an amazing writer: we get invested in your AMAZING work!
Please continue...I can’t wait to see Kelly submit to Mariah. She needs a dominant Mommy to fully devote her submissiveness to! Sandy would be so jealous and humiliated....such unfair advantages...but so hot!!!
I agree with another comment, that this may be amongst my favourite of your stories. The conclusion with the true statement of the equality between submissive and dominant was beautifully presented. All too ofter the submissive's choice to kneel is overlooked, as is the dominant's respect and care for that choice. you brought this reality forward with respect and dignity throughout this story. thank you
Jasmine,
Wow. Lucille and sweet Elly and Sandra and Kelly. This is the hottest story I have ever read ! No, really.
One of the best, please continue with more focus on Kelly transformation :)
Thanks
Awesome, you are such a brilliant writer! Can't wait for chapter 3!
Just saying! 👍🍷
Thank you for continuing this story,
I was waiting for this, another briiliant story.
Looking forward to chapter 3 :-)
I enjoyed every page you might want to consider doing this professionally your much too talented to do it for free
As always your stories are superb. This is one among them. However, I wish there will be chapter 3 n chapter 4 wherein further training of Kelly and further usage of MOMMY's identity in domination.
Once again a cock hardening tale.
You never fail, how many of your readers both male and female would love to be in the subs place.
Another wonderful story Jasmine can't wait for the next installment of this story.
If you wait another 5 years to finish this, that’s absurd. This is, frankly, one of your best and the underappreciation for it is a crime.
Hello Jasmine,
You are the very best writer of all time in this field. At this point, I am contented to just read your stories exclusively. One fascinating aspect about them is that I read them over and over with the same enthusiasm. They are classics, most certainty not for reading just once. This story is one of your top features, one of my favorites. Please consider writing a squeal.
Thank you.
If this doesn't get a third chapter or a mention in one of the other stories I'll be sad. Mariah and Sandra need to get married before this is all over~
With such well written characters and an un-rushed plot. This story really deserves another chapter or two, to bring Kelly's submission to the fore to complete Thier unconventional family. As others have said would love to see them get married, and live sexily ever after!
i love Your stories. This series calls to me on many levels due to events from my past. Please please continue this series.
SSL you have all of us under your control, we are all submissive to you and your five star writing.
This is one of your best stories. Please consider a sequel.
Thank you.
Would love if chapter 3 revealed Kelly to be a natural Dom and have her challenge Mariah for household dominance.
I have read about a dozen of your stories. So far, this is my 2nd most favorite among your stories, the "Cheerleader's Mom" being the first. I hope you finish this story. I really want to see (read) the four main characters together in a room where Kelly is submitting to Mariah, and Sandra submitting to Taylor. I'm also hoping to see a scene where the doms are ordering Sandra and Kelly to make out with each other for them to watch.
I don't understand why chapter three isn't out yet. I mean, Kelly's submission is so close.
I absolutely love the stories you write, you're the only one who's stories I return to over and over again, would love to read about the continued seduction and training of Kelly
I'm really looking forward to the 3rd part to finally read about Kelly becoming a submissive. Hopefully it comes out soon!
Simply one of the best stories in the business. Hey, Jasmine. Please consider a sequel!
Jasmine, I am a long time fan of your articles. I believe this is the best adult story in history.
Are you ever planning on continuing this story? It's a great premise and I think we all wonder what's going to happen next.
Jasmine,
This story should be displayed in an art gallery or in Masterpiece Theatre. Please consider completing with part 3.
Jasmine, this story needs a chapter 3. Her daughter needs to become like her mommy and be claimed by their mistresses. Please finish this story. This needs completion
After reading this series again (I have enjoyed it more each time for the magical way you weave the future and past experiences together) I must add my voice with those below to ask for the continuation of this artful series. Unlike the others, however, I will happily use my name. lol. This is much too wonderful a tale to have lingering any longer. Please add to this magnificent story.
330. Interesting concept having much of the story reflected in flashbacks, but I was excited as I expected the subjugation of Kelly after you teased us earlier with the “truth or dare” game. Now will we have to wait forever for the sequel?
This is one of my favorites series. I'm dying to find out how Kelly is turned and more pets for Moriah and Taylor. Please?
PLEASE write a 3rd part! I am dying to see if and how her daughter submits to Mariah and then Taylor. then maybe they both get pregnant together at the end? I’m begging you….. please add a final chapter 😢
Would be interesting to see taylor actually become kellys submissive since mariah said kelly id basically her daughter
Jasmine, this is a masterpiece without closure. It is my favorite adult story of all time. please consider.