by DominicVance
Uh, where did that come from? "Ow, I want to have sex, but it hurts, Daddy!" "Ah, I know what will help you: BDSM! Suck my dick, slave! *slap*"
I'm confused, that came out of left field and didn't really fit in.
I am definitely with Lapinator on the BDSM just coming out of the blue. I have read all four chapters and the first three and a half were of a calm caring man taking care of his two special ladies then all of a sudden BAM. Does not fit with the story line you have painted.
It's not that I didn't liked it, but I was expecting a little of edging (not sure if this is the term) like teasing her with the toy until she was begging and half haze with list.
Can't wait for the father to fuck her, tied to the bed with her mother's pussie on her face.
Love it completely!! So nice to see Sasha want all her Daddy has to give her, sexually. I'm glad there are more chapters for me to read and enjoy (you know - stroking while I read!!). Wish I could be right next to you as I read. Being bi, your understand, right? I'd definitely love to fondle and sucks you until you are fully satisfied.
Love, sucks and fucks,
Bob
find_two2@hotmail.com
Idk if I get the comments about this chapter not fitting in. I mean, bdsm is about opening up in a lot of ways so I honestly think this as a next step made sense. You’ve also been sort of foreshadowing when the dad always wants to take the roughness further but holds back. What I’m saying is that I think it worked lol.