by DominicVance
Unfortunately, this chapter dropped down to a 3, at least for me. I think this could be a much hotter story, though, if you slutted the women up more. they certainly seem to want it!...lol...
I don't normally comment or vote on a story until it's over, but since this is as far as you have gotten, I'll break my rule.
I like the story alot. I feel. That you could have posted all 6 chapters in 1, 12 page post.
I'd prefer more foreplay. I realize that this is fiction, but all women like foreplay to get their motors running. Granted these sluts seem to have motors that are always running.
I'm not sure how the mother and daughter that are afflicted with Vaginismus seem to be able to do most anything.
Loved chapter 6!! Wow, I wonder what will happen with Ash's brother. I hope he likes cock as well as pussy!! I'd enjoy seeing him get it on with Daddy!! So nice to see a guy give a good blowjob or take a hard dick in his pussy!! Now I'll read and find out!!
Love, suck and fucks,
Bob
find_two2@hotmail.com
PS - I'd also like to check out your package Dominic!!