by MtnManslut
You've got to be kidding. Not even the loudmouth moron in the back of any high school classroom would could suspend disbelief enough to get into this story.
Well, maybe he could...but no one with a brain could.
"He is sucking on one cock (quite skillfully, I must add) while stroking another hard-on that is pointed at the side of his face. Meanwhile his ass (a nice muscular one) is being pounded mercilessly by a third piece of hard meat!"
Yeah, because this is the sort of thing that your average teenage guys do. Give me a break!
could happen in real life maybe not quite this quick and wild , but my son and i dohave our times and one of his friends(secretly) and i played for 2 years before he moved off and hot hot both of them
Get off the soap box. The guy is writing pornographic fiction--not true confessions--and is damn good at it.
May be some truth to it as well, as one mother has confirmed..
In any event give the author a break. You should be encouraging him.
He has obvious talent.
Wow I wish I was that boy getting fucked while sucking and strokeing 2 other guys off. Wuts funny tho is my name is thomas and I use 2 always b called tommy XD
I could only imagin the wild things id do if that was my life and id enjoy every bit of it esecialy being the bitch of a gay 3 sum then later fucking my own mother with the same guys
Even in fiction, I can not stomach bi-sexual males. Did not bother to finish reading this story.
And poor little Jimmy is still a virgin. He never did get to join in all the fun next door. Or is there a sequel somewhere?
Really enjoyed the hot action and descriptive narrative. Well done but it does scream out for a part 2 at the very least.