by RejectReality
with her friend and the permutations that might include might well be a nice follow on.
Not if it does not flow with enjoyed sexuality though.
Without some care it would detract from the first three page in the story!
The “Nude Day” premise made sense. More often than not, it’s an awkward addition to Lit Stories. Having the action take place around a Nudist Camp doing a charity fund raiser was good.
The characters are likable and sexy. Nancy was too much of a bitch. But...oh, well. A sequel would be nice, but not necessary. Still, lots of potential!
I liked reading about a mother having her daughter’s rejected lover. I did something like this, I fucked a younger girl’s mother years after moving out of their neighborhood. Her husband had died in a motorcycle accident. She was a lonely widow who needed someone and I wanted an older woman. I think she, Linda, told her daughter about our encounter. During sex she clawed my chest while riding me asking if I liked her daughter. I admitted I did not because the daughter rejected me. Imagine a woman riding and asking about her daughter while making the bottom twitch with every squeezing his nipples.... I took over and gave her carpet burns driving across the floor when I pounded into her to make her know what a man can do. Write about ”mother fucked” so I know you understand this note.
I'm a big fan of your "mature" and "milf" stories. Like most of your stories, this one deserves a sequel.
I would love to read more about their continuing romance. Well composed.
I hope that they get caught by MORE than just Nancy! Just think about Ann and Jeanie - Bike Ride Miles for Cancer -- how about - Screams for Cancer? !!!
What a hot writer....
It does deserve a sequel. I hope that Nancy catches them....
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two talons up!
That was really fun, thanks for writing it. I agree with the last comment, a second part would be great. Maybe he gets a turn with Jeanie as well? Or a threesome with her and Gayle? ;)