by elleVeut
drawn out a bit only to end a bit too abruptly, perhaps like the relationship itself... Evocative use of style and language.
Im enjoying the mix of sexual and psychological tension in this very well written story. Please give us another chapter.
Holy crap this is so good. Their dynamic is irresistible, the seduction is fluid and desperate and dark and good and good I love it. I'm so intrigued, I have so many questions, I need moooore. I supposed you waited four years to finish obsessions, maybe you'll come back to this one day. Anyways, I greatly appreciate this, just want you to know you made someone out there happy.
This is the best bdsm writing ive read. So accurate. He’s so on point, my ultimate fantasy dynamic. Pleeeeease write more.