All Comments on 'Lilith Of Fire And Brimstone Ch. 10'

thanks for the new chapter, just dont forget to let us know about Lilith

I've finished reading the entire series. Mechanically, I had some trouble with the punctuation and comma placement. But the story succeeds in the way it encapsulates the guilty fantasies emanating from the succubus part of the male brain. It's devilishly fun imagining a straightforward seduction by an aggressive, naked, gorgeous she-demon determined to drain a man of every drop of sperm. A part of me thought there should be more scenes where Lilith or Sister Mary screwed some poor stud to death, but fewer such scenes enhances my appreciation for them.

Almost forgot that Mary hadn't transformed completely yet. Considering all the corruption and "improvements" to the church she had been doing I'm a bit suprised. ;)