All Comments on 'Lilith's Emporium: Vampire Party'

by maestro84

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
little shop of delights!

Thanks, really enjoying these tales linked by the emporium!

Please at some stage, revisit the, possible, relationship, between Nessira, her heart and beau from the previous story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Spellingg is a little off in this episode of your story. It is well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More please

Love your stories.

Please continue with at least one more story about emily.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 6 years ago
Not quite so good

The story this time not up to your usual standard. Was it rushed or were you not totally in the zone of writing?

This is apart from the poor job of spelling and wrong words used.

Unfortunate as your storytelling is normally really good through this series.

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...