by maestro84
Thanks, really enjoying these tales linked by the emporium!
Please at some stage, revisit the, possible, relationship, between Nessira, her heart and beau from the previous story.
Spellingg is a little off in this episode of your story. It is well written.
Love your stories.
Please continue with at least one more story about emily.
The story this time not up to your usual standard. Was it rushed or were you not totally in the zone of writing?
This is apart from the poor job of spelling and wrong words used.
Unfortunate as your storytelling is normally really good through this series.