All Comments on 'Lily - My Savior'

A truly outstanding story. Kind of a tear jerker at times, but very, very well written!!

A little lacking in the plot in my opinion.

The impotence issue should have been discovered, possibly prior to the wedding, or on the first night of the marriage.

The impotence would have been a 100% cause to have the marriage annulled since the consummation of the marriage did not occur.

Then the hubby has an affair as an impotent? Top that off with the divorce lawyer suggesting she get pregnant to prove...what.

Anyway, thanks for your time and effort to entertain dimwits like myself. I am looking forward to read more.

Very well written story. Had me crying through a good portion of it.

I am a grown man and I will say this in all honesty. This brought a tear to my eye with the creativity on the whole subject plot and how everything was written. Great story!

That was a very beautiful and touching story. I was heartbroken when Mai Ling passed away but the ending was so moving.

Absolutely loved it.

Thank you for a beautiful story of love tragedy and hot sex. The babies really made the story so believable.

Nice story. Not just all suck and fuck. Keep up the good work,

Good job trying to hide your pedophile fantasies.

Heart-warming for sure...one thing that could improve your technique is having the conversational exchanges loosen up, so that they appear more like we actually speak to each other in such an intimate relationship. Otherwise, very good work Toby_dog, I enjoyed it.

Lily married a man who had been impotent "since birth"? That's not possible. And she married a man who was obviously impotent when she met him and therefore never had sex with her....hard to believe, and he was having an affair? Some major problems with that part of the story, just not credible. But the basics of the story were nicely done.

Reads like it was written by a machine.

Well your catching on, this was a much better job.

Well done, some places still need a little help, but I see

your still working on it. Keep up the good work and.

...THANKS...