by notunique
Leaves Las Vegas without her and her baggage... she can find work on the old hotel strip.
You put this pathetic drivel on LW during the July 4th special? Enjoy your high score.
If you like it, good for you
Probably over the top for most
But you made a major erratic side trip when you tried to explain away your protag's desire for cock. Kind of shifts the category, and annoys the heck of a lot of readers,
Again, more power to you if submission to the couple is what you want, just don't get surprised if you get dinged for it
Well I did it! Am I proud of myself? Not particularly. Going to Vegas without my 60 second hubby probably wasn't the best thing to do. I had been sexually starved, sexually frustrated and so needed to be fucked hard, deep and often so badly!
Orpheum69