All Comments on 'Linda's First Party'

This is the first time I have read a house party story. It was great to read and picture as i read it too. Thank you. I'm looking forward to more of your stories to come.

excellent! Great tease!

Hot house party and shy wife story! Maybe some editing would catch a few written errors and person-point-of-views. But you have the talent to build the scene and carry through the action, so keep writing and submitting!!

Hope it’s not the end.

Wish I could get my wife to do that.

Thanks

Bob

Linda got right into it

Good build up!

Loved it...but you might want to get a proofreader.