by writedoctor
just compliments. I thought it was a good story and a slightly differant version than usual. Good job.
Definitely agree with the first comment writer, well written, and a different twist. Writedoctor spins his tales charmingly and elegantly, yet is graphic nonetheless - a very difficult balancing act.
- Sir D's pet, jannelle
Writedoctor, you commented on one of my stories a long time ago and I've been meaning to check your work out sooner - and I wish I hadn't waited so long! Your details are incredibly accurate and intricately described. Like one of the other reviewers mentioned, you manage to fuse graphic details within the context of a beautiful story. In the end, I think that is what erotica is all about: making people realize that the 'dirtiest' and most vividly described portions of sex are simultaneously the most beautiful and the most meaningful. Your story has accomplished this superbly. I look forward to reading more of your work.