All Comments on 'Lindsay Learns Something New'

Good premise.

But eroticism is not all it could be.

No description of her pussy at all. He doesn't say he likes the way it looks, and she doesn't ask.

No indication she got wet watching him masturbate. She doesn't say so. He doesn't smell her arousal and ask.

No discussion of either having watched porn.

No discussion of whether she masturbates. Does she? How often? Does she have an orgasm while doing it? What does she think about while masturbating.

When she's masturbating his cock she doesn't explore different techniques/speeds/etc. to gauge his reactions. She doesn't ask if it's OK if she does it slower so he doesn't cum so quickly?

No significant/extended touching of her by him.

Three stars.