All Comments on 'Lindy's Change of Life'

the slut wife was just that a slut and all of them are retarded. jeez why did i read this?

Story about a woman who makes a choice to go from a respected wife to an owned whore. OK, her choice. It comes with a dysfunctional family as a supporting cast. At least Luke wasn't stupid enough to try to stay with her. Decent writing but overall a romanticized view of a dead end lifestyle.

Your name was enough, 1 star.

I have to say this is a bad story. You don't know who's fucking who, who's sucking what and in the end nobody gives a shit anyway. Waste of time.

This belongs in a new catagory titled: Complete Shit, don't waste your time! I don't even know where to begin....and I only read the first 5 paragraphs.

What it is, is a story of a woman that was a respected loved wife into a round heeled skanky trollop, a bi sexual pervert and a man pervert. No loving wife at all.

Had a bad story contest this one would be a 10 to 1 favorite,this story if it were a race horse would lose in a claiming race against horses ready for the glue factory.Bad writing,shallow plot (luke just disappears?) and characters that have zero life to them and smell like bumpf.

I know, we judge a story from our own point of view but mostly from the feeling that people should get what they deserve. If you think Lindy deserves a womaniser to find true love, fine. If you think Luke deserves better, fine. I agree with another comment that, at least, you let Luke walk away and make this a lasting (un)willing cuckold story. Maybe you should write another chapter about how Luke tells the Greek family to stuff their job up ... and all by himself turns his life around and into success, all along gaining more self confidence and experience with women as to put the Greek lovers to shame. If not, fine. But I'm sure you can write a better story than this one if you think a plot better through.

This is sick fetish story -1*

and damn little quality

Let's call it "Unbelievably bad shit from unbelievably bad writers".

We could just leave it at at cucking, bisexuality and other assorted weirdness, we now have to yank incest even further into the so called LW category?

You re either a woman or a fag

Is this whore still writing about whores?

....or garbage, whichever you other readers prefer. One star is too many.