All Comments on 'Lines Crossed'

Cuck shit

Congratulations on publishing your first story. It was skillfully written, especially for it being your first. Unfortunately, it wasn't my cup of tea. I'm not into stories about despicable characters for whom there are no repercussions, so I'll be skipping your follow-up efforts.

Amazing Read. Wish i could give the story a higher rating. finally a good story after a long time

26thNCuck approved

Most a vignette than a story. No drama, no real feelings. Too simple, too fast.

Your writing it's not bad so I hope you follow up and continue the story.

What a bitch, so a presumably happily married mother of two decided that it was perfectly ok to give a blow job to someone not her husband and being half naked whilst doing so. She is then contemplating having an affair. Certainly glad she isn’t my wife.

Let’s have part two in which she meets him again and again until her husband and children find out......

She will go all the way without a thought just needs the right amount of time to cover her tracks! A *4* from me.

and the reason this crap happens all the time.... pretty much this is a great picture of the real thing... I am not a fan of cheating wives and husbands.

That's the end?

Your first try, and you start with Cuck shit, why?

LW is flooded with shit like this, and you are adding to it.

I understand that mentally affected minds have problem understanding term Loving Wife against Chip Slut, after all those two terms sound alike.

This are the facts, I hate to give you my opinion on top of that, so may by my score will indicate it... -1

Slut whore!!!!!

1/5

Oh, and cuck shit

Good read.

Quite well put together.

I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Two weeks later hubby and kids gets sores in and on there mouths and goes to dr. herpes and hiv .

She’s had a taste (pun intended) of cheating and she’ll definitely be receptive to more. She crossed the line when she left her friends in the parking lot and headed back to the restaurant door.

She has started down a slippery slope. It will end badly. She deserves only bad things from here on.

You stopped the story way too soon. She's going to cheat again. She's going to get caught, and her family is going to be destroyed. Her life is going to go straight down the toilet, and all she will have will be lots of regret for the rest of her life. Also, something bad should happen to Jason. Obviously he was married. Why would he then cheat with a married woman?

Just another cheating slut wife story . She doesn't even feel guilty for cheating. And the way she acting was not her first time doing it.

is she dr. jill

and is she married to a republican wimp

so i m guessing the wimp will get a hardon when she tells him

and they will live great lives as cheaters , liars and maybe even become the first family

no wonder the usa is going to the shits

1 lowly star billion limp dicks and a house full of vomit

A well written believable story about an (unfortunately) everyday occurrence. There is sufficient information to draw our conclusions regarding the future of the protagonists. Thank you.

Need another chapter, where her husband catches her, has a martial arts lady damn near kill her, and files for divorce and custody. Or, maybe she gets in an awful wreck going home...

I liked it very much. Very realistic. Would love to see chapter 2 where she takes it farther and gets caught.

I think I'm glad her husband was willing to dump her cheating ass. Especially when she said I didn't have sex with him. and I say that with Bill Clinton as my witness. So why are you divorcing me? He was divorced for cheating so he was at fault not me. I am innocent, just ask his wife, she'll confirm he was always a cheater... not me.

Good fast read with no extra nonsense. Well written and I suspect that it is probably closer to a true story than pure fiction-which is why it is great. Thanks for writing it!

You need to give us a conclusion. She needs to feel the pain of being caught

It’s a great start to a story. It should have a continuation process including where the husband finds out. And don’t make that has been a wimp please

This could happen easily in real life and if it doesn't, guess what, it's fiction! Not Moral Ethics 101. And if you don't like this stuff - don't read the category!

And a cheating cunt who doesnt love or respect her husband is supposed to be....what...sexy reading? Only for the widdle wee wee crowd.

Glad she wasn't unhappily married. She might have really crossed some lines. Won't take long until she crosses some electrical lines and her marriage and life blows up in her face.

just a selfish cheating whore in her night out. Poor children! Soon their family will be destroyed. The husband will be happy for getting rid of a whore.

just another whore wife i suppose the husband does not find out he married a slut

This feels like a kid has written this . The story I have read before and yet again another boring story. The has got nothing new as I say it feels like a kid has written it. It’s got no imagination creativity nothing to show that it was written by your own thoughts. It looks like you have just read a few other stories and cannibalised there stories so it seems like you have written it by yourself. I normally point out that newbie writers show promise but in this case I can’t. Don’t get me wrong I love these types of stories but when the writers can’t be bothered to write a story of there own merit . It’s garbage you will always know when a writer has tried but this is not even worth a read. I would say go read more of these types of stories but knowing you all you would do is copy another story from one of the greats . So what I will say is go try a different category you might get a better response because you are just an embarrassment to the loving wife category so sorry.

Ell I’ll be darned, xtra handsome, big ol thick dick but yet he is divorced. Wonder why mr wonderful is single?

I think she will realize how much she screwed up. Will not continue with Jason and will be thankful she didn't screw up her 20 yr marriage.

I really can't understand why people write these comments. If you do not like this stuff don't read it. Take your stupid remarks and go home (alone.) First, you read it; then you criticize it. You're all morons.

I am not a writer but it seems to be short with no ending. Torn between a 2 and a 3.

Hopefully a semi will run a red light, right into her, on her way home!

"Well, darling, where have you been last night?"

"I've been with my girlfriends as you know."

"Yes, but Jack was in the bar too and has seen your girlfriends leave. He has also seen you leaving with a man and coming back after an hour. So who is the man you cheated with and I have to beat up in the next days? You can also give me his address so that I can sue him for destroying my marriage."

Husband doesn't t even know cuck shit!! Anonymous, you ignorant inbred

Needs part 2

Well done and hot. I see you've made a lot of friends here. lol. Looking forward to more.

Amazing how these loving wife stories always portray women has having low morales, o wonder the youth are so bad given women like this raise them. Amazing in all these the person they Cheat with always have larger or thicker cocks - women must have a so the sense.

Liked it! Very well done. Waiting to see what you do with part 2. Um..... There is a part 2, rightttttt?

Literate and intriguing story fragment.

Great use of LW’s POV, humanizing while not excusing her cheating.

Great first effort... don’t let the haters bring you down. Knee-jerk low ratings from BTB Neanderthals render meaningless the rating averages in the LW category.

Pretty hot realistic story about a cheating slut of a wife . I’d love a percentage of married people who cheat and then how many get caught. I’d say well over 50% cheat and an extremely high ( over 75% ) don’t get caught . Pretty sad a supposed happily married mom just goes a gives a blowjob to a parent of her former student. She probably will go home extra horney and look to fuck her hubby . What’s amazing is there is a huge crowd of willing Middle Ages woman looking for dick on some of the sites. Guys I know that are divorced are getting laid more now than when they were young and single . Will there be other parts to this tale .

This is a tough one. Should I, as a reader, like her and hope she never strays again,...?

Would I get more erotic bang for the buck if she decided she loved it and gets her girlfriends to set up a MILF Escort agency,...?

She CLEARLY failed the husband test at,.. uh,...maybe 6 different points. Would I feel better about the whole thing if the next chapter reveals that one of her girlfriends called her house 30 minutes later and her husband went and found her car/phone. So now he plans to BTB?

You've got lots of choices here, D-Gate. Drive On!

This story is about a low life, cheating, whore and that's the good part.

How the hell can you not continue this? Everything about this says chapter 1 of…..

Is there another part coming?

Please continue this!

Good start but only a 3 star as this looks like becoming yet another unfinished story.

Not good, waste of my time.

Well plays it like she is a good saintly mama just going to have a meal with her friends. Then goes and sucks off a guy and swallows his cum. If hubby had done this she would divorce him quick. She is a whore and deserves to have the shit beat out of her for fucking around on her man.

Anonymous is a HATER! Fuck JRandyJ. Good story. A reality type story, thumbs up.

Excellent story well done just the right length. And very erotic keep writing