All Comments on 'Ling'

by DevlinCarnate

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Excellent

This is my favorite story in years! It reminds me of the fantasy I used to have with my Korean ex-girlfriend. Excellent job, and well written!

FailedscoutFailedscoutabout 5 years ago
Great Control Story

I enjoyed the control an the post orgasm torture scene was so incredibly hot!

I know that you warned us but I really hated the poo play and consumption in this story. For me, this was a very erotic story until the farts and poo.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
love your stories!

seriously these are so awesome mate i can't get enough of this and Margery.

i literally made an account just to favorite these and follow you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Excellent, polished writing. Nice choice of words. Full with fantasies that makes me gasp. The way Ling talked made it really hot and authentic. Absolutely one of my favorite stories.

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I am a stranger in a strange land. I came to realize many of my fetishes through erotic fiction and hoped I could give something back. Please note that the stories under the Fetish category are very strong fetish (toilet games) and are not for everybody. Please stay away ...