by angiquesophie
'Delicious' But, I need, need, need!!! to know how this throbbing story proceeds. Is Margo compelled to service the girlfriend? Does the grey-eyed woman seek her out again?
Please write chapter two soon. As I am panting to read it and remain very wet!
K.
As always your descriptions of people and their emotions are richly detailed and starkly believable. I love Margot as a character and how you highlighted her longing fir love. The ending was bitter, yet apt. 5 stars.
I smell her perfume still...and shiver with delight...
I can't believe you have us waiting so long for a follow up! Please????
I hope this is not the end of the story for Margot. You have fleshed her out very well in a few words. The last two paragraphs are spectacular.
You have an intriguing and unique way with words. This was a wonderful vignette and a decadent thrill