All Comments on 'Linh Ch. 02'

I hope you continue the story! Excellently written!

Excellent work ! Can’t wait for the next one.

I am enjoying this one...more please!

This is an amazing price of work, you need to continue the story q

i...liked it, read the whole thing

excellent english...no misspellings or stupid typos

no terrible grammar, no ¨off of´s¨ to trigger my disgust...

a few of the usual lit cliches...i suppose, expected by average lit readers, so, forgiven

however,...i kept stumbling over ¨lopsided grins, arched eyebrow(s)¨ and such...too corny

the female anus has been my favourite orifice since puberty

sadly, things have been slowing down for me - i´m eighty one

thank you for writing!

I appreciate the characters, who are quite likable, and admire how they seem to have a great relationship. The sex is hot, with plenty of specifics. The submissive and anal combination works for me. The story takes a little time to set the stage and adds appropriate non-sex scenes. Still, this is all about a wonderful sexy relationship.

Hot. Hot. Hot.

Wonderful.

More...please!!!

I really loved the read dear author. I sincerely hope you publish a continuation to this lovely story.

A second chapter beautifully written. As I mentioned before the roles described are not my cup of tea generally but your story nicely shows the caring love between the two characters and that negates my concerns. A story that is good enough for one to see oneself in the characters is well deserving of a 5*. Well done. A.

I would really like you to continue the series. It’s wonderfully written with a solid storyline and fleshing out of the characters and you left an opening for further chapters with the head of East coast sales.

The sex was good but I found myself reading just to find out more about Jim & Linh. Please continue this series.