All Comments on 'Lipstick Prints on the Window'

by JimBob44

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buran288buran288over 5 years ago

Another Winner!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Once again, well done

5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
self-edit

I read something of yours before where you used that same.."edited it myself with MS Word..."

First, really, that is horseshit. There is always someone available, how much do you care about your work?

Second, did you sit and write this all in one sitting? The writing at the front was fair. Good even. Then something happened...still, I gave a very high score, even though I think writers should rub a little pride into their work.

Thanks!

pg240pg240over 5 years ago
Fantastic

Fucking fantastic!

JagnagJagnagover 5 years ago
hervorragend

Or in English, outstanding 5*

meme165meme165over 5 years ago

Another fantastic story, thank you.

A minor technicality, HMS (His/Her Majesties Ship) is used for Royal Navy ships only, and I don't think a navy ship would have been used for ferrying immigrants. It would have been RMS (Royal Merchant Ship) not HMS, but that's only a small note for future reference

NHarmzWayNHarmzWayover 5 years ago
Wonderful

Have loved your writing since I first found you through Inferno. Keep it up please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Enjoyed

I like that u took time to write their history/heritage which explained to how and why this all started. Which made the book more understandable and enjoyable. I think it was an all around good story. A lot of names and character to try to get straight lol but good! Thanks for your story.

dinkymacdinkymacover 5 years ago
Super story!!

Thanks for sharing a great read.

Frankie1952Frankie1952almost 5 years ago
Excellent

Loved it, what a fascinating story.

AsgarthAsgarthover 4 years ago
Great

Loved this story a lot. Wright some more please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Adolf the Austrian

Mr Hitler was Austrian. He never spoke in a Bavarian dialekt.

joosforchambersjoosforchambersabout 4 years ago
Adolf Hitler with bavarian dialect?

Have you ever heard Hitler's voice? There's nothing of bavarian in his pronounciation.

And the history about jews and lutherans... Man this is history is really something else, you described the way of life of a jew and a german protestant so well detailed that I'm even wondering if you're jew too. The accuracy is excellent tbh

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Just skipped through all that history and started from when Carl and Russell was born.

Gabriel and Mryna great match

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Skipped the history. Loved Mryna and Gabriel

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