by JimBob44
I read something of yours before where you used that same.."edited it myself with MS Word..."
First, really, that is horseshit. There is always someone available, how much do you care about your work?
Second, did you sit and write this all in one sitting? The writing at the front was fair. Good even. Then something happened...still, I gave a very high score, even though I think writers should rub a little pride into their work.
Thanks!
Another fantastic story, thank you.
A minor technicality, HMS (His/Her Majesties Ship) is used for Royal Navy ships only, and I don't think a navy ship would have been used for ferrying immigrants. It would have been RMS (Royal Merchant Ship) not HMS, but that's only a small note for future reference
Have loved your writing since I first found you through Inferno. Keep it up please.
I like that u took time to write their history/heritage which explained to how and why this all started. Which made the book more understandable and enjoyable. I think it was an all around good story. A lot of names and character to try to get straight lol but good! Thanks for your story.
Mr Hitler was Austrian. He never spoke in a Bavarian dialekt.
Have you ever heard Hitler's voice? There's nothing of bavarian in his pronounciation.
And the history about jews and lutherans... Man this is history is really something else, you described the way of life of a jew and a german protestant so well detailed that I'm even wondering if you're jew too. The accuracy is excellent tbh
Just skipped through all that history and started from when Carl and Russell was born.
Gabriel and Mryna great match