All Comments on 'Lisa and Her Family Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
yikes

such a charming family. not too sure about you, mr, author.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I like it but....

Awesome story but it would be way better with dialogue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I couldn't read it past the second paragraph

What an amazingly crappy story! I mean, you really had to work hard to write something so full of shit that I totally lost my erection! You sir, are one of the worst writers on here. Don't give up your night job delivering pizzas.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Not bad a tall but skip the drugs. Keep going with the filth

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