All Comments on 'Lisa, Naked and Invisible!'

Brilliantly written! I absolutely loved it! I would love to read some of Lisa’s further adventures, too!

Great story, but I feel like it should have been longer. Such as Lisa actually getting herself off on the sidewalk.

I like Lisa. But I do agree with the others, it would've been more fun if she'd been able to get off. Or even better, been discovered, and then they had helped her get off

Good story. Enjoyed it.