All Comments on 'Lisa Needs a Lawyer'

Very good writing. Crisp pacing. Vividly descriptive. Psycho-emotionally insightful. Shamefully really arousing. Thank you!

5 stars. Loved the plot twist. Is last sentence a sign there's a second chapter?

Perfect. Perfect perfect perfect.

Good story but felt that the story of her with his friends was brushed over. This could have been made in to a multi part story, the background of Jamal working for the stepfather could have been extended out. Just feel that the story was finished abruptly.

So good