All Comments on 'Lisa’s Summer Vacation Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Too many unanswered questions!

Does Lisa keep hooking? If she's in a loving relationship with Jason does she keep fucking her Dad? What will Jason's parents think of his loving the hired whore; the very thing they didn't want to have happen! Does Lisa recruit Sally into the agency?

I need to know these things. Keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great story except

Everything was going on great with a awesome story line,but you decided to change the pace and have her daddy show up and do his daughter! When the story was going great with Lisa and Jason falling for each other and then daddy shows? I guess I wear my heart of my sleeve but the ending might have better serviced with Jason and Lisa sailing off in the sunset and living ever after

ReefkeeperReefkeeperabout 13 years agoAuthor
I know!

To the two folk who commented yesterday... I know you're right, and that's why I'm 5,694 words into LSV Chapter 06. I'm hoping to tie up as many loose ends as I can in it but if I can't, and if I keep getting encouraging comments on this series, who knows about a Chapter 7!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Chapter 6 would be nice

I know it has been a while on this story but a chapt.6 Lisa's marriage to Jason - Arthur giving the whore (daughter) away.

Sally & Arthur friends :) and meet each other..

Joining Lisa & Jason on their honeymoon.

Thanks for writing these stories they are all enjoyable reads.

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