All Comments on 'Lisa's Surprise'

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kinkboikinkboiover 5 years ago

Literally ruined it the second she started enjoying it. Blah.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yawn

No build

No anticipation

Mechanical writing..that’s the word I was looking for

evonnaevonnaover 5 years ago
very consensual...

... she's very crazily needy... OTT needy.... (it doesn't need to be at all realistic, sure, but it's very over the top, as long as you know that).... and this has been put under non-consent, when it really isn't... i think it needs to be somewhere else...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Totally unrealistic

Anyone who's ever had anal knows that she'd be howling alright, but not with pleasure if that was the buildup...🙄

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

THIS is non consensual? Yuck.

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