All Comments on 'Lissa Learns'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A fine story crying for a sequel

Thoughtful. Well-written and engaging. And refreshingly without typos or errors. Bravo. More on their future relationship would be welcome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Gently and gentlemanly

Good story with kindness and understanding. This is a lesson is not being aggressive with someone inexperienced and mentoring them into adulthood, or one aspect of such. Older men and women can ease the transition for younger people if they use kindness and are gentle. Too bad there are so many hang ups and more's that interfere with growing up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent read

Very good story, but five pages too short. Please keep up the good work. We need more writers like you here.

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