Litter Bug Boogie

Good, but would have been better if all the truths were revealed to her. Plus, Lucy could stand the object lessens.

Hahaha! Brilliant!

Enjoyed that a lot. only thing I would have liked was a more humiliating/demoralizing conversation with his wife/ex where she realizes her mistakes and ruination. There was no other man in this scenario, which is a fairly here, it was all selfish pleasures. well done.

Loved it! Death by a thousand cuts. "Max Payne" indeed.

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I liked this story. Gave it a “5”. But here is the thing , Ladies. If your man cheats on you, you will rake him over the coals to take him back. You will threaten to leave him penniless, living in a cardboard box. Every friend and relative, plus work relations will know EXACTLY what he did, regardless if you take him back or not. However, if YOU cheat, then he needs to get over his ego, or you will take him for every dime he has, and leave him living in a cardboard box. You will insult his manhood, and brag about your affair, to your friends. All the while telling HIM, not to talk about it and risk embarrassment. And women wonder WHY men won’t commit to marriage. Marriage, not prostitution, should be outlawed!

Very nice BTB, especially with the quintessential 'stiff upper lip' attitude of the protagonist. No raging, no ninjas, nothing over the top, but still an absolute tearing down of everything that mattered to her. Her entire life.

She has nothing to distract her and let her create a delusion that her life could be normal going forward. Everything that happened, she brought on herself.

Great read. You are no 'UKResearcher'.

Great story. 5 stars. I especially liked the British tilt to it. To the ex-wife” bugger off, you slag!”

Same old plot but a nice measured way of presenting it.

I posted this after reading some of the inane comments already posted. I liked the Brit speech, The reasonable tone of the commentator and the fact that a selfish, brain dead bitch got her comeuppance.

Blah, blah, blah, nothing new here, wife cheats, husband makes a mint and leaves her penniless, as is usual in these stories the revenge was way over the top so the husband can reclaim his masculinity, all crap

Bit long winded 5*****

Logical, straightforward, with an emphasis on evenhanded dissolution.

All responsibilities handed squarely back to her, and all resources converted.

Too stiff upper lip style story for me. No blood, no mental or emotional pain for the cheater just for the cheated, just too British. Sorry.

What a stupid bitch!

A 50 yo Post menopausal female who will, VERY soon find herself being showed out the desirabilty door as her good looks fade away. She threw away a man that loved her for selfish, meaningless, sex.

He will find other options. She won't.

No

5 stars - I actually like how he managed to sort out all the problems associated with his SLUT.

At least he did not kick her to the curb, like he should have. The SLUT got exactly what she deserved.

I'll say I enjoyed it right up until you threw this stupid cliche into the mix and turned her into the same LW that every lazy writer uses because to put in the effort to right her as sane and rational is too hard and wouldnt make the knuckle draggers happy.

It was VERY good right up to that point then it went totally stupid. Thats not even debatable, you literally wrote the same woman nearly everyone does. Same tired dialogue, same degree of dumb and cluelessness.

None of you writers really accept that your laziness is showing when you go full on boilerplate, because few of you can be objective to any degree.

You wasted a possibly great story.