All Comments on 'Little Bear Ch. 01'

One of the best stories here. Good rythm. Nice description.

Give us some more chapters on this story

You know what? Tender love between consenting adults should NEVER be taboo! I was brought up in a strict Irish/French Catholic family, no incest, but had I felt physical love for one of my sisters, and she for me - Well!

I really liked the way that this relationship was handled by the author. Sure, alcohol helped the outcome, but, if this is what they needed to express their love for each other??? I'm sure in any loving relationship, the alcohol will play a smaller and smaller part each time. Their expressions of love will take over and love alone will prevail.

Fine story.

Wish I had a loving brother....

Gotta give you a thumbs up on this story, and I bet you could go farther with it. Please do!

Even some short ones here and there!

They drank a 12 pack of beer, a bottle of whiskey and wine and they could still manage to get all the parts working? I don't think so. Why do writers always get their characters totally shitfaced then expect us to believe he can get it up and she can cum?

I really enjoyed your story however it felt more like boyfriend -girlfriend rather than brother-sister . Looking forward to chapter 2 .

a little to unrealistic for me no real guy would put up with her teasing he would tell her to either behave like a sister should or stop teasing and start fucking keep it atleast sounding realistic