All Comments on 'Little Bird Sings'

by Hannamarie

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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 12 years ago
Competent writing

but somehow, the fire is lacking. It must be very hard to make multi-partner sex scenes come really alive. You're nearly there, just not quite. Keep working at it. 5 for effort though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love the ending

It sure works for me. And I love the surprise ending. :-)

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