by UltimateSin
I think that it's really good just as it is. Personally, I would have loved having Andy doing both of his sisters, but since you said that you have already done stories where the brother is loving both sisters, I think a departure from that is due.
By all means, DO NOT have Andy fuck his mother. Ignore the other children out there. Andy and Anna have a beautiful, loving relationship and they should remain faithful to each other for the rest of their lives. ❤ ♥ 5/5
If you do a chapter two, keep Bella and Andy together solely. But make Mom and Angela a couple. Also I would love to see Bella get pregnant.
I would love to see a second part where Angela, Bella get pregnant from their brother. And maybe the mom too
Great! It could go on for generations. We might get to the point where there are kids with three breasts and two dicks!!!
Adding Angela couldn't improve an already outstanding love story. Cinco Estrellas!
This story needs a follow up. Really great, and can not wait for the next chapter. But, leave mom out, too many stories with the mum. Keep it to his sisters.
This story is just begging for a sequel !
Please don‘t let us down … and not waiting too long !
5/5 stars !
Please write more. This Tory could go so many direction. I prefer the living and caring family direction with maybe adding some of there friends as he realizes his vigor grows as his family adds and dismisses other women at there will, making sure to talk the brother into it each time, lol.
5 An excellent emotionally satisfying sibling romance story. I have no notes it's that good.
I just want to extend my profound congratulations to the author, UltimateSin.
You have created a masterpiece, Sir!
I would also enjoy seeing more of this story. Another chapter or perhaps even more.... <g>
Thanks
My suggestion would be that little sister and mother come to brother and insist that he make love to older sister, to help her with her emotional situation. He may resist at first, but when he sees that little sister is serious, as is mom, he suggests they talk to older sister. Of course, at first she resists, but everyone can see she wants to participate, but feels bad about it. The way the logjam is broken, mom decides that, to show older sister that this is all about love and family, and not stealing brother away, mom goes down on brother... you take it from there, but yes, everyone ends up sleeping with everyone, including women on women.
It is an interesting situation where Angela has not been aware of her deeper feelings for her brother. This is one of those stories where the honesty and open communication within the family will allow further exploration.
I could see Angela and his mother developing a deeper connection with the MC and with the grandchildren in their future on offer, my only curiosity is whether Angela will remain with similar expectations.
But hey, I'm a romantic.
A little implausible but entertaining. Could see a part two being done involving sister.
You’re debating on whether to do part 2 to this story, are you fucking mad? Of course you have to. Get your fucking arse into gear and start writing AND Of course you have to add Angela into the mix and I wouldn’t mind you adding the mother as well, after all like they said, THEY ARE FAMILY ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Awesome story need part 2. The son needs to pleasure both the older sister and mother as well
5 stars. Bring the mother and older sister to be made love to as well by the son.
A "MASTERPIECE", indeed!! Before commenting here, I read the first (12) or so comments...and am quite pleased that my sentiments about a sequel, and it's contents, have already been spoken here.
I love the other readers here, and that we are on the same wavelength most of the time; also, let me say, this has the EMOTIONAL ATTACHMENT that many of us appreciate from an attentive author as yourself!!
Andy, Annabella, Angela, and Mom...the entire family forms the tighter central core to the future family that the girls will produce!! Mom may even decide to have a child/grandchild with her own son!!
So, with all that said, PLEASE, fit writing a sequel into your busy schedule so we may read more...Thank You!!
Five**5**Stars, by the way... how could it be any less!!!!???? 🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌋🌋🌋🌋😱💥💥💥💥💥😱💯
Because of the level of intimacy and support within the family, this has become my favourite story. You’ve told this tale well, and smoothly paved the path towards complete familial inclusion. It, indeed, would be a gross injustice should you decide not to continue. This is the most heartwarming story I’ve read in a very long time.
Another beautiful story of sibling love. This family are so open and loving with each other I feel it would be inevitable that Angela and Mum would soon be intimate with "Big brother". I would be very happy to read more of this family. Top story though.
Not so sure about the mom, but definitely certain about Angela, to what extent or duration I'll leave that to the Author, please do write a few follow up chapters to this story
That was one incredible story, I haven't checked yet if there's a chapter two as thought I'd comment first. But if you did do a second I think you could do beautifully with either option of Andy being intimate just with Bella or allowing Angela to explore great sex to up her standards, but I think as Andy seems to that the love relationship is only with Bella
Very hot. I wsntboth Anne and Bella knocked up.
Strangely in my family such a story happened.
My aunt and uncle had a child that was adopted out.
Until she came around at age 30 and said hi I am related to you. I was in HS then so quite memorable news. That Girl actually had the same genetics as my own father. She had no physical defects.
One if my brothers wanted to date her but somehow they put he kabosh to that.
I had 5 older brothers only.
I fantasize if I had been born a girl what might have happened being raped over and over.
I had a girl in church that was picked up by 5 neighbor boys that fucked her in a car. She quit seeing me as she felt unworthy for me. I told her I do not care but still she refused. People should think of how this messes up others even not the girl.
I often wonder how her life turned out. She was only 10 at the time. I hope she did not become a prostitute. Most of them have been abused before.
I pray she is doing well.
5 stars, excellent story, loved the attention to detail, I hope you do write more on this family, take it all the way, you are doing great work.
A second chapter is a must second sister or not but I could see you taking it even further a full family love feast you have already hinted that mum is Bi so maybe walking in on mum and Angela could also happen
I loved the story and would love to see a 2nd chapter with our without older sister
Please write another chapter! If you’re looking for opinions, I feel the story is naturally leaning towards including Angela as an intimate third partner, but only temporarily.
I believe that true deep love is a wondrous thing, more so between siblings.
Considering the enormous future challenges facing the pair of siblings, involving another may well add to the stress of keeping the relationship hidden.
I also think that including a third person will cause the story to lose it's luster, changing it into a meaningless tryst.
Would have loved to see a continuation, but as is, it’s an excellent story of love and acceptance.
The story started off great, imo. I really liked how the mother in this story was supportive of her children starting a physical, loving relationship. I enjoyed the surprise of learning the older sister was supportive as well. Typically, you would think the older sister would be horrified to learn such a thing. So, it was nice to see you break the cycle and you did it well...with the mother and older sister explaining why they're okay with such a taboo relationship in their family.
I thought you went way overboard with the explicit sex talk. I think you were even crossing the line into it being vulgar. In a different story, I have no problem if the mother and daughters are talking about cumshots across the face and pissing on their male family members IF that's just how the story is written. Here, you started with a sweet, tender piece about brother-sister love beginning. After finally getting around to making love for the first time, we're now at:
"Too busy having some hot sex, Mum," Bella replied, "He left me pussy feeling rather tender last night. And I just had to ride his big cock this morning."
An 18-year-old girl who kept her virginity hoping that maybe her brother will return and love her...after being apart for 5 years. All of a sudden she's telling her brother how she wants his cock in her asshole BEFORE they even had sex? Again, I'm no prude. I've read and enjoyed much crazier stories than this one. I just thought the sudden drastic change was a big negative, not a positive.
I'll still give you 5 stars because the "story" was sweet and nice and enjoyable even if I thought the execution disappointed me at the end, because there is probably someone who gave you a 1 star score solely because his ex-girlfriend's name was Anna and he hates that name! I've actually seen someone say that in a comment about a different female name (the lead in THAT story).
Great story. If you add another chapter, I wouldn’t include anyone else in their relationship. I honestly hate that people so often feel the need to turn everything into a harem situation
A second part/chapter would be nice, but not necessary. Taking Angela as his second lover/wife would be the best. If not, don't write a part 2. Leave things alone.
I'd love for you to make it a longer series...
The quiet, shy ones are always the ones to watch out for... Still waters...
could be amazing to continue this story with the older sister and why not the mother and while at it have them also closer too.
Please don't think that if you write more and add the added love of an older sister, and mother, that it would be considered "just another 'harem' story"!!
The way you write, I don't believe that it would turn out that way.
Different locations, different names, similar situation, but never thought I would EVER read about the same feelings of all four in a story here or anywhere.
Finish it!
You are able to do it right from what I have just read!
Finish it! Please.
If you do write something with Angela, please include a part where he beats Brad's ass. That would be really satisfying.
Adding his older sister to the mix would be nice, just don't try to force it into a full harem with Mom. Allow her to just be happy for both her girls...