All Comments on 'Little Men'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Top half was OK

But why is this guy so chilled out about his baby missing?

Me? I'd go: SHOCK! HORROR! PANIC! PANIC! PANIC!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent, bloody excellent

First time I've ever reviewed, just wanted to say how much I liked this. The way you describe it, the way you show the correlation between the POV and the facts.

I have no constructive criticism I can give, just wanted to pour on some somewhat useless but still nice to hear praise. I love this...monologue, I suppose.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
the story is awesome!!

but you cant just stop !!! where the hell is the rest of the story what happend to the boot?why did kenny ask if they wanted to hur them?what did they wissper ? i could go on and on!!!!!! you are killin me man!!! Angie winnett

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Excellent

That was great! Keep up the good work! DiscoBayXIV

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