All Comments on 'Little Mermaid Ch. 04'

Things worked out for her in the end!

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Wonderfully crafted story! I wait each day, hoping for another episode!

Reality is beginning to intrude on Ariel’s skewed self-image. Something’s gotta give.

It feels like the opening of racing season at the track. The bell rings, the gates snap open and the horses thunder downrange. Pity the fool caught standing on the wrong side of the rail.

Next?

It is still you no matter how far away you go. People are pretty much the same everywhere so if you don't change then everything stays the same. This is a really interesting story. One that is almost a psychology textbook case. I am really interested how she works things out. A well written tale of angst.

I’m glad she’s going to classes, though I have no idea what she wants to major in (does she?). Hopefully she’ll knuckle down and do the work and not just party all the time.