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Click hereI still couldn't cum. And the longer I took, the more she chattered, telling me how good I felt, and what a marvelous cock I had, and how much she admired my 'staying power' and how good I was, and I can't remember what else, but it was incessant, non-stop chatter!
Her chatter slowed down as another orgasm overtook her and she turned her concentration to that, moaning, sighing, spasming, trying unsuccessfully to milk me.
As she started riding me again, she started her chattering saying she hoped we could keep this up all day, and as long as I could stay hard, she could keep cumming!
Trying to distract her, I tried to grasp her non existent breasts, finally satisfying myself with tweaking her tiny stiff dark nipple, making her shiver with apparent delight as her little ass bounced faster. Finally feeling the pressure build up, I began pulling on her nipples and raking my nails down her back. Ultimately, I came again, and she struggled to catch up, reaching her climax as mine ended. As I began to soften, she gave a disappointed whimper and collapsed on top of me, eventually rolling to the side with her arms around me. I feigned sleep hoping she would stop talking! And ultimately she did!
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Chapter 5. Back to the Carnival
I drove her back to the fairgrounds where we found her car and exchanged parting remarks of no particular consequence. I noted that both of us carefully avoided any promises to 'call each other' or any hint that either of us wanted to see the other again, other than her saying it would be nice to pose for modeling and my promise to keep her in mind if I had a need for a model of her type. But I knew this would be unlikely – her lack of development would lend itself only to kiddie-porn, and I wasn't into that! But a head-and-shoulders session might be possible!
I heaved a deep sign of relief once she had found her car and we had each driven off in separate directions! She had worn me out, both physically and mentally. Her constant chatter had really done a number on me. But she *was* one *fabulous fuck!*
Maybe I would call her and do a real photography session of her, possibly even turn on the hidden video cameras.
But right now, all I wanted to do was go home and get some peace and quiet and give my shell-shocked ears a rest! And to get some sleep!
The end
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoas long as you dont talk to much, all in all it got me to laughing dang good story, well writen
Anonymousover 9 years agoI am a mid-20's woman who is a lesbian and has tiny breasts like the unnamed lady in this story. My nipples are like electrical circuits when a lover covers them with her mouth and bites/sucks/licks and it drives me up a wall. I have NO complaints about my sexuality or ability to give extreme pleasure. Don't give ladies like us the short end of your thoughts and feel as if it is a bad thing. We cannot change anything but sex is sex is sex is sex and I am, in my opinion, a beautiful woman with lots to offer.
Averygoodlayover 12 years agoWas a good story, but I have to agree it was not a first time story.
You did an excellent job of describing her although it gave the image of an underage girl than a woman.
solvsuperover 12 years agoI am pretty sure the First time category is meant to be for stories of virgins, mainly. Not just people having sex together for the first time. Otherwise 95% of all stories on literotica would be in this category! Apart from that, not bad at all!
Anonymousover 15 years agofirst of all,why dont you want us to know if you are a male or female? in fact the voice in most of your stories is a middle aged male..this story confirms youre a male..sorry,this story is one of your weakest..you shouldnt have bothered..with AIDS around am suprised you wrote it...
Anonymousabout 16 years agoBut even though she had no breasts to speak of, it would have been very hot if they were as sensitive as any boobs could be -- large, small or any sized. It also would have been hotter if she'd undressed as quickly as she did -- for the photography session -- but had to be worked on and convinced to have sex. Naked is one thing, long, detailed foreplay would have made the story much more erotic.
barnabusover 17 years agoAuthorWow! (oops . . . an exclamation point . . .)
Opinions seemed to wander all over the spectrum.
To be sure, I apologize
for offending anyone. I tried to stress the fact that even though she was
small, she certainly had other very positive talents.
In any case, a hearty 'thank you' to everyone who sent feedback.
For those of you who didn't like it, maybe you'll enjoy the next story a
little more.
Barnabus
barnabus329@hotmail.com
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoim a 4 foot lady and kinda offended by this story. I find it offensive that he kept saying she had no body ect
I Feel bad for the girl if she had know how hed call her, I bet shed have bitched slapped her.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoliked the story had a fuck buddy like that no breasts, but large nipples.extra senceative,any touch drove her crazy.She had the deepest and largest pussy, I,d ever been with,but had mussels to clamp it tight,as a vice. She didn,t talk she moned and groned so loud all the neighbors could here. So you were sure to get looks and coments,when you left the house. Sometimes the neighbors would call during sex and make coments.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI *wish* you'd written a story instead of having *so many* stupid asterisks interrupting the flow. Still, it saved me getting too involved in your *shit*
