by JMaxwell69
Where's the rest??? There must be more!!! You did a great job... in the beginning, but did you really had to hurry up the last part in such a manner? Be a real sport and give us at least one more sequel with Jack and the lovely Emma having fun in earnest.
Sincerely MaitreNuit
Great story, and one of two stories about Emma watson im aware of, and the other is mine! wish we had more stories of her.
Loved your story. It was well written and didn't focus too much on the star, which worked well. I am surprised there aren't more stories on this celeb and I will be writing my own to make up for it. Well done, I really enjoyed this one.
Not bad kinda felt bad for claire poor thing never Really got fucked But with such a major star like emma Who could blame jack LOL nice read
Story rolled along nicely, good descriptions and decent dialogue (always hard to write). Whether you find the situation either believable or enticing, it seems like the author get lost at the end. The story just enters out (sorry), no goodbyes, no thank-yous, no dates for future fun and games, just nothing. Even a pointless sex story needs some kind denouement, even if everybody has had a couple of good orgasms! Don’t leave the reader hanging, I was looking for a little more.