All Comments on 'Little Packages Ch. 06'

Only 4 stars because this chapter is a bit light on the sex, but I'd give it 6 for the writing and story line. Too bad we only have one dimension for our ratings.

Keep up the good work.

so Michelle and Meg are Bi as same as Kat / Kitten. I could see some sidestory comming... Meg has been there to help Ben the last jears, maybe time to help Meg to get some life back - especially after Meg + Michelle find each other hot directly after just seeing them.

This is a testament to the lack of depth in most readers. This is a stupid story penned by a limp woke putz who likely couldn't arouse a woman over 16. I remember being introduced to a couple like this and ended up banging his dissatisfied girlfriend who was desperate for 5 minutes with a real man. She ended up stalking me for months until I just moved to get away from her. Pathetic this lame story has such a following.

Your lib skirt is showing...

Amazing! You've managed to make the romance so sweet and the sex so dirty here. How do you do it? This is the best thing I've read on Literotica so far.

Bored I've had enough of this drivel

This series continues to be awesome.

5*

It just keeps rolling along at such intensity I don't know what to expect. 5⛤

I have reread this story multiple times, finding something new each

time. I will keep looking. Your story and characters are fantastic

Please write another chapter. Love it so far and want it to continue. Great story. This

Love the story. Please write chapter 7

Great writing, insightful

Just love everything about this story... good pace, good communication, feelings and good sec with feelings...please vive us more!👍👍👍

Another fantastic chapter in what has become one of my all-time favorite stories! I love that we get to see the softer side of Meg, and her relationship build with Kit too

This series really sets the benchmark for all the others. It should be required reading for all aspiring authors especially those who think Literotica is for repetitious mechanical descriptions of sex.

Create a great story and everything flows from that. Magnificent. Roll on Chapter 7.

Another fantastic chapter of an excellent series! I can’t wait for the next instalment.

Well done!

This may be the best example of a gentle D/s story I've ever seen. It sneaks in so slowly that you nearly miss it for the first 4 or 5 chapters. It could live in the bdsm category. It is a submissive-initiated d/s relationship where we get to explore 1 kind of submissive headspace, all tied into a great fantasy romance. For that reason alone, bravo! And great characters to boot. Helen seemed a bit over the top at first, but you folded that into the story brilliantly.

Great story I enjoy the multi-dimensions to every story in this series. Please continue I like learning more about kit and her adventures.

This wonderful story continues to deliver. Read the entire series again before the release of this chapter. This chapter did an excellent job of showing the challenge of the age difference and how they are at different points in their life with Kit working and generally juggling life. Can't wait for the next one.

I just can’t express how good this series is. Well developed characters, realistic dialogue, well edited, and of course incredibly hot sex. I can’t wait for the next installment.

Utterly brilliant writing, thoroughly enjoyable.

I’ve been checking your page since the first of May. Now I have to wait an entire month more. Noooo!

Outstanding. More please. A great story told by an excellent writer. Look forward to many many many more. It rocks.

Bravo......enjoying every bit of this series,now to wait for the next part damm it

This story is well up to par. I love it , it can't be any less than 5 stars all the way.

More more more !!!!

Stellar. Stay the course.

Thank you!