by crazyhotsexpot
Please do continue. I love this story and am sorry to hear you plan only one more chapter. Thanks for writing.
i am so dissapointed to hear you are only planning one more chapter! Please do more than that you started out great!
Kristy Fierce
...a lot! I think there is a lot you can do with the story. You could involve all kinds of torture but as punishment and exploration of sex. She's knew to sex and he's more experienced. Maybe thru other sexual acts she can begin to see that he views her as more than his slut.
Suggestion: what about outdoor sex...where the Huntsman can hunt her? Oh what a thrill that would be. Fear of being chased, relief/anticipation of being caught...and how would he make her pay?