by Domes88
This is getting better. Please continue and thanks for your time and imagination.
The mom surprise was a nice trick. The scenario is good, but the sex is too hurried. Could do a lot more with mom and the sex with sis, if more drawn out and detailed, would be more arousing. I still gave you a five for concept.
Being so obviously phone-obsessed and leaving a hickey kind of gives away your age and mentality.
Nice twist with the mum ! You didn't describe her body in detail but I love the story so far more please
So casual and erotic.
I enjoy the way your story flows.
Can’t wait to see where you go next.
Very good possibilities with this story. Mom seems very horny and let her son get away with alot; does his Dad not take care of his Mom sexually ?? How about his sister ? Is she of age hopefully and obviously she is horny and interested. More details would be very helpful and Yes please write more; thank you.
Mom trick was such a good twist!! Fucking loved it. It would more awesome if it was given a more space to the story. Still one of best one I read in a while. Please continue
Too much sex without the relationship dynamics by any of the characters... 4*
Loved the twist of mom. Outta no where and tossing her panties? Made my to hue stiff.