All Comments on 'Little Sister in Lockdown Pt. 03'

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Domes88Domes88over 3 years agoAuthor

Is Ava gonna let her dad fuck her, or is she just trying to make him jealous???

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Is she gonna fuck her dad?

collin4xxxcollin4xxxover 3 years ago
Pregnant....

I’d love to see him knock up both his sister and his mom...

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 3 years ago

Pretty good sex narrative, but the family dynamics are too unrealistic at this point. Kind of summed it up at the end with his question... 4*

Jdavis77Jdavis77over 3 years ago
Ok

I hope it's just trying to make her brother jealous but I got a feeling you are going to do the family orgy thing I hope you don't

booty77loverbooty77loverover 3 years ago

OMG 100% HOT thanks it just keeps getting better

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Consequences

I agree with Collin...he should knock them both up and make them both submissive to him, right over daddy’s nose!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Knock up either one/ both?????

If the only way you can feel like a man is to knock up a woman, you have some REAL problems, and issues with self esteem.

Hickeys? I learned to not give vampire bites back when I was in High School, and fucking several of the neighborhood housewives. Yes, there were cougars back in the 1950s, and 60s.

suyaosuyaoabout 3 years ago

the first 2 chapters were 4 stars but this one was 2 stars at best since you added the dad

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

No honestly leave the dad out of it just the other three is way hotter

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I don’t know what the hell is happening to your family , but I wish they had adopted me !!! LOL kinky and taboo as hell . Good read , I enjoyed it ! 5stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hopefully she’s only trying to make him jealous or the story wouldn’t make any sense. We don’t know anything about him besides he’s a cuck. Don’t reward the cuck

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I too agree with keeping the dad out of it.

It will ruin the story and plot too much. First 2 ch 5 star but 3rd will be 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

why does every story get ruined by involving the parents. No young people are gonna find their old parents hot. Thats how i know these stories are written by middle aged sloppy dudes.

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